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I bought this, knowing you were going to review it. I have read quite a lot of classic literature, so I'm used to the flowery, old-fashioned writing style. But this...THIS...I struggled so hard with! The writing style was so long-winded and comma-filled, oh my goodness. The story kept bobbing up and down between the waves of his prose. The interesting bits pulled me through it and I'm glad I had the experience, but boy... I drowning there for a bit, hahah!

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Oct 14, 2023·edited Oct 15, 2023Author

I know! I found it far more demanding in that regard than I imagined. RLS’s Jekyll and Hyde was nothing like that, and I think that was what I imagined I was getting into. What ended up working for me was the the oblique and opaque way of keeping the story half-hidden. I found that fascinating the minute I stopped being aggravated by it :)

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James’s language is challenging. If he can find a roundabout and complicated way to write a sentence, you can be sure he’ll do it. All that aside, the story carried me, increasingly so toward the end, which I had to re-read twice and then ponder.

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Yes. I had to re-read the end a couple of times as well. I don’t want to give away what I think happened, but oh my!

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Do you think this would be a good first Henry James piece? Or would you recommend a different book. I have a bunch of his on my to read shelf and always go back and forth on where to start!

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I’m really not the right person to ask that one. The only James story I’ve read is this one. I found it fascinating and very frustrating—but worth the read.

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I read Turn a few months ago and frankly was happy to return it to the library. A fascinating and a frustrating read.

I really appreciate your take on the intentionality of the obscurity and of the off-angle vantage point.

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“Fascinating and frustrating” is a pretty fair summary!

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I remember reading Turn Of The Screw many years ago and being thoroughly confused to the point of frustration. I'm not sure I ever completed it. I wanted to be scared but i wasn't. I guess if you approach it expecting the ambiguity and seeing how he pulls it off, it's a much better experience.

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I think that feeling of bewilderment was something he was intentionally cultivating. I wonder how you might experience that now, many years later.

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The last paragraph made me laugh. Was that an intentional Turn Of The Screw, so to speak?

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