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Wow. Excellent.

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I was scared She was part of the accident.

Create Nonfictional qualities throughout.

You wrote:

"Erik Rostad said it sounded like a great opening line to a story. I took it as a challenge."

Does this mean…?

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Oct 30Liked by Joel J Miller

Delightfully eerie and a wonderful commentary on the dangers of relying on technology. Super sharp and a fun read!

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Superb opening. An eerie disquiet running throughout the entirety of the piece. Well done!

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I woke to the smell of my morning java on auto-brew, opened my computer, and read 'Ghost in the Machine'. I'm now desperately searching for the auto-type feature to accomplish today's writing goals for me...

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Glad that mower took you somewhere.

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